+1 to this.

As someone playing jazz for 8+ years, my two cents on the glissandos/vocal slides is that they should only be marked if the slide should occur every time. Otherwise, keep them omitted.

Transcriptions are hard to make, but it looks like you’re doing a pretty good job so far!

It’s not necessarily required. All landings are visual maneuvers anyway; lights just help you see in non-ideal weather conditions